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wow i guess i've never heard a piano melody in a dnb track sounds quite weird, kind of psychedelic! awesome!
+ i love the drumpattern.

Adjeye responds:

Thank you sir :) You might want to hear Chaoz analyze too... I used the piano as main melody there

Really good for a preview! Got something of deadmau5.
As far as this is now, the intro is too long or has too little effects on it.
The lead melody coming in at about 1.35 or so really fits well.

Go for it, make this one awesome! :)

Hurks responds:

Thank you for the review! :D. I noticed the lack of effects on the intro. I worked on this from 11PM-4AM straight, and I just decided to upload at least part of it. I've already added most of this stuff though, and I might actually upload a finished today or tomorrow if I work on it enough.

I also don't know what genre this is but what I do know is that I like this track :)

Especially the vocals, how did you do them?

hanorotu responds:

Vocodex and autotune very nifty tools

for the first dubstep track is quite good... you have to work on your structure and buildup and drop thou :)

Carr77 responds:

I'll try to do that, thanks for the comment :D

some really awesome guitar riffs here! :)

wearefm responds:

Thx Sirius!

Wow for the first track its awesome! Did you remaster it or it did sound like that when you produced it? my first track had really baaaaad mixdown ^^

Skullfy responds:

This actually isn't my first track, it is old tho... but thanks! :)

you got some really good ideas and i really can imagine this to be a cool song, but the instruments used kind of dont really fit :/

shizan responds:

yea, i see your point!
thanks for the feedback :)

really good so far! loving this chord progression + melody

Dj-MilK responds:

real glad you like it)) thanks very much!

awesome! just awesome! you really got a great feeling for good piano melodies + chord progressions + scale variation

Strimlarn87 responds:

Thanks! That's just what i'm trying to do. It's all about the new/different chords and beautiful melodies, with a some kind of story to go with it.

great track! awesome melody, only thing i have to critizise is the transition starting at about 01:08, just fading out melody 1 and bringing in melody 2 sounds a little bit awkward. if you can fix that transition (maybe by an alternate ending of melody 1) you have a really awesome track!

Hikari responds:

You where right, so I fixed it.

Hey! :) I am Sir Sirius, a 22 year old musician from Vienna, Austria. I started producing electronic music in October 2011 using Ableton 8. I'm still at a developing point, since I can't even handle my DAW 100%, so I appreciate constructive feedback!

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