SirSirius's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[OvertheLimit 4 {Dj-Abbic}]

Really awesome for a work in progress, the volume mixing isnt optimal and maybe you still need to EQ a little bit but who cares its WIP! I'm really diggin this smooth progressive intro and the drop and the following bassline. Good work so far, waiting for the finished product (:

DjAbbic responds:

Sweet, thanks for the input. I was hoping the drop wasn't too bad. I'll work on the mixing right now. Thanks again for the review.

[Radiance of the Moon]

Im seriously amazed! The first part was a bit long and repetitve thou, but when the piano hit at about 3.36 this track gets soo damn awesome! And yeah it would perfectly fit to an rpg, this sound reminds me of Final Fantasy 7 :)
I hope for you that someone on here uses your tracks for a game / flash so you get some more exposure, you really deserve it.

TheShroomie responds:

Wow, thank you so much for the insightful feedback! Yeah Final Fantasy and Golden Sun (as well as several other games) have had a lot of influence to my composing.
Some day I hope that my work will be put to good use. Hopefully anytime soon :)

[My dog's name is Pancakes]

You got a nice melody there, its just a little bit repetitive. Big ups for this sound from scratch!
To make this track even more awesome you should add different melodies and rythms so you can make an intro, a mainpart and an outro, because listening to this one loop gets boring after some time and take no tention into the track. good job so far :)

Barrellaj responds:

hey man thanks for a positive review! I try my hardest to make legit sounds with 3xosc, I win some and I lose some. I'm actually in the process of changing it up now, not adding anything new yet, just timing it better so it progresses more rather than just getting up to speed right off the bat. I'll check your stuff now man ;)

[TLM - Android Beats]

drums are sounding good i like them, but the melody sounds a bit weird.. what scale is it?

SeventhSolar responds:

140 bpm

[Rabbit - Fucking Tired]

0:40 hit me like a truck :d and im loving the piano sounds afterwards.

VlikeVince responds:

Cool
Glad to hear :)

[Rebirth]

great track! I'm not into trance but I can tell that the technical part of this production is awesomely done. everything sounds clear, your covering a wide spectrum of frequencies, good work! :)

CrimzonWolf777 responds:

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! ^_^v

[Melodic Redeemer]

the lead melody got a nice sound and is quite catchy, but this track doesnt ssem to be done for me. im missing a bass and some variation :/

MattHowan0311 responds:

well i guess this is what i should expect for spending 10 minutes on a song but ill see what i can do with the bass for this thanks bro :)

[Karma Burn]

drums sounding a bit weak, try taking other samples or eq them better. the kick has to kick more and the snare kind of needs to punch me into my face. also this track is a little bit simple, try using more instruments and making it sound more full!

BDPooMan responds:

I've been experimenting with a sub mix on my drums, I think it needs turned up as well with a little more punch, doing a lot of fine tuning still on that. On the next one I will try to add two or three more synths and make it more complicated and add more incidentals, one of the main things i hear as feedback is that i need more synths and complexity. Thanks for taking the time to write man!

[Footprints]

lovin the melody entering at about 1.49! but before this point the song is pretty boring to me because such a long intro based on just one loop is a little bit too repetitive after some time... but good work behind 1.49 :))

metalheadmarch responds:

I thought it was a bit of a stretch for 1 pattern to go.. but once you've listened to the same loop over and over it kinda gets into ya, I was thinking of doing much more with this but i haven't posted anything in months.

[Square From A Distance]

the moment when u switch the melody at about 1.49 sounds a little bit awkward, dont know if those 2 fit well together. and i didnt know you before, but in the last 2 minutes i can definitely here some psy influence ;)

wax-jr responds:

thanks for the opinion man i usually don't get so much advice and i produce by myself so mabe i need help maybe huse isn't my stuff hehe but i'm just exploring what will sout for me but honestly this is the first house/electro track that i almost got it right and XD