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SirSirius

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the lead melody got a nice sound and is quite catchy, but this track doesnt ssem to be done for me. im missing a bass and some variation :/

MattHowan0311 responds:

well i guess this is what i should expect for spending 10 minutes on a song but ill see what i can do with the bass for this thanks bro :)

drums sounding a bit weak, try taking other samples or eq them better. the kick has to kick more and the snare kind of needs to punch me into my face. also this track is a little bit simple, try using more instruments and making it sound more full!

BDPooMan responds:

I've been experimenting with a sub mix on my drums, I think it needs turned up as well with a little more punch, doing a lot of fine tuning still on that. On the next one I will try to add two or three more synths and make it more complicated and add more incidentals, one of the main things i hear as feedback is that i need more synths and complexity. Thanks for taking the time to write man!

really great flow and voice is also quite good!! beat also sounds awesome, banger production man! :)

great beat... but you guys are not the best singers :p sounds very funny thuo and seemed like you guys had a lot of fun doing this! :)

yeah sounds good you really brought a spacey feeling into this!

lovin the melody entering at about 1.49! but before this point the song is pretty boring to me because such a long intro based on just one loop is a little bit too repetitive after some time... but good work behind 1.49 :))

metalheadmarch responds:

I thought it was a bit of a stretch for 1 pattern to go.. but once you've listened to the same loop over and over it kinda gets into ya, I was thinking of doing much more with this but i haven't posted anything in months.

the moment when u switch the melody at about 1.49 sounds a little bit awkward, dont know if those 2 fit well together. and i didnt know you before, but in the last 2 minutes i can definitely here some psy influence ;)

wax-jr responds:

thanks for the opinion man i usually don't get so much advice and i produce by myself so mabe i need help maybe huse isn't my stuff hehe but i'm just exploring what will sout for me but honestly this is the first house/electro track that i almost got it right and XD

sounds pretty awesome, i can really imagine some deep bad voice shouting over this! :) nothign to critizise

really lovin the drums used in this one! but its just a flute and drums and sometimes this vocaliced open hihat, so for me it sounds a bit empty and repititive...

stackz989 responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm always glad to read reviews. I do agree that something was missing. Just thought it would have been a good start menu or options screen in a flash game or intro theme for a video. But I'll post up some more hits in the near future bud.

really interesting sounds, loving the instruments used. sounding psychedelic :d in which scale is it written?

stackz989 responds:

It's good to hear from you again my man. I Pretty much used the FPC, Pad_Satyr (Which I Named After) and Choir using an M-audio Keyboard. Made this beat in a breeze - Glad to hear someone enjoy my music.

Hey! :) I am Sir Sirius, a 22 year old musician from Vienna, Austria. I started producing electronic music in October 2011 using Ableton 8. I'm still at a developing point, since I can't even handle my DAW 100%, so I appreciate constructive feedback!

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